Hi. You should only use the shuffling in the LoTR skit not in the other skits (like this one). It does really suit this skit either. Make the character walk as normal.
Also...You could have Luke on screen already. It seems like wasted time having him walk onto the screen. I think what is lost in this rough draft is the joke itself...Wasn't there meant to be one stormtrooper on the left who did what none of the others can do? It might be an idea to pop in for a chat to discuss this skit again and make it more defined in terms of action.
For example in the That's Bane clip (below) they've nitpicked that Batman talks a lot before he takes any action giving Ban...
Hi. You should only use the shuffling in the LoTR skit not in the other skits (like this one). It does really suit this skit either. Make the character walk as normal.
ReplyDeleteAlso...You could have Luke on screen already. It seems like wasted time having him walk onto the screen. I think what is lost in this rough draft is the joke itself...Wasn't there meant to be one stormtrooper on the left who did what none of the others can do? It might be an idea to pop in for a chat to discuss this skit again and make it more defined in terms of action.
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