Hi. Apologies for the slow reply. I think it would be easier if you all came to see me on Tuesday instead of me leaving feedback here. I think there is quite a lot to discuss here. As I said before, the essence of your ideas are okay but your drawn versions are making things a little to complex or missing the target to some degree. Given that we have had a chat about this a few times I feel something is getting lost in translation so it would be better not to add written feedback into the mix. If you come in and see me early I'll go over each storyboard with you and we'll hatch a plan.
For example in the That's Bane clip (below) they've nitpicked that Batman talks a lot before he takes any action giving Ban...
Hi. Apologies for the slow reply. I think it would be easier if you all came to see me on Tuesday instead of me leaving feedback here. I think there is quite a lot to discuss here. As I said before, the essence of your ideas are okay but your drawn versions are making things a little to complex or missing the target to some degree. Given that we have had a chat about this a few times I feel something is getting lost in translation so it would be better not to add written feedback into the mix. If you come in and see me early I'll go over each storyboard with you and we'll hatch a plan.
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